(1) Schools across the nation is working to make sure students are getting at least 20 minutes of recess each day. (2) In Florida and Rhode island, laws have been passed guaranteeing 20 minutes of recess for elementary students. (3) In other states and cities, similar laws are being proposed. (4) Parents and teachers understand that students need a break from sitting and studying in order to do her best work. (5) However, all of these laws focus on elementary schools. (6) Elementary students need to take breaks, older students would benefit from breaks, too. (7) Our students need a break!

onas wants to make the controlling idea clearer in the first paragraph. Which is the BEST revision he should make to sentence 7?


We need a break!


Just because we are older now does not mean we don’t need breaks!


Adding a break to the school schedule would have many benefits for students and teachers.


For the benefit of teachers as well as students and everyone, we should make sure to add a break to the schedule here at school.

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Answer 1

Answer:

I agree man

Schools across the nation is working to make sure students are getting at least 20 minutes of recess each day. (2) In Florida and Rhode island, laws have been passed guaranteeing 20 minutes of recess for elementary students. (3) In other states and cities, similar laws are being proposed. (4) Parents and teachers understand that students need a break from sitting and studying in order to do her best work. (5) However, all of these laws focus on elementary schools. (6) Elementary students need to take breaks, older students would benefit from breaks, too. (7) Our students need a break!

onas wants to make the controlling idea clearer in the first paragraph. Which is the BEST revision he should make to sentence 7?

We need a break!

Just because we are older now does not mean we don’t need breaks!

Adding a break to the school schedule would have many benefits for students and teachers.

For the benefit of teachers as well as students and everyone, we should make sure to add a break to the schedule here at school.

Explanation:

Answer 2

Answer:

Heck yeah!

Explanation:


Related Questions

Read the sentences and drag the selected phrases into the correct category. Read the sentences and drag the selected phrases into the correct category. His voice was a cannon shot in the silence. Dad is as strong as an ox . My brother is a couch potato these days. My best friend holds me up like a rock . She sings like a bird . Metaphors or Similes

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Answer:

Metaphors: His voice was a cannon shot in the silence. Dad is as strong as an ox. She sings like a bird .  

Similes: My brother is a couch potato these days. My best friend holds me up like a rock .

Explanation:

Both the metaphor and the simile are figures of speech that promote subjective comparisons between two elements in the same sentence, however these comparisons have different relationships. The comparisons formed by the metaphor, relate two terms that have something in common, where one "lends" its meaning to the other term. The simile, however, makes comparisons between two terms that have nothing in common, but that can present a new meaning to this relationship between them.

Answer:

meta is cannot shot and couch potato and smiles are as an ox and like a bird and like a rock

Explanation:

got it right

Hmm love chu - pair a very tasty and big p.a.u

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Answer:

???

Explanation:

huhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

WHAT YOU GUY GOT FOR CHRISTMAS??

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Answer:

I didn't get anything for xmas, but my mom and I went to the mall and I got hella snacks and a rlly cute sloth plushie :P

Explanation:

friends help me please. :(


4th question ​

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Answer:

do you want to be my friend

write a letter to mother describing you stay in the new boarding school​

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Answer:

What in the world

Dear Mother:

I hope this letter finds you in great health and upbeat spirits. I am enjoying my hostel life to the fullest. It is all because of you! Well it is really quite different here. I have to get up at 4:30 a.m. and then we go for our morning physical training module. If I were at home, I would never have got up so early and done all the hard training that I am currently doing here. I am more agile and quick now. The studies here are very enriching. Teachers take extra pains to ensure the maximum imbibing by the students. I like my all subjects. The most wonderful aspect of hostel life is the ambience here.There isn’t a lot noise of like the city had,all peaceful all the time. The abundant nature and freshness of the mountains is quite conducive to studies. I feel like studying whenever I get free. The rest is all fine. Give love to Papa, Granpa, Granny, and sister.

Yours affectionately,
Destiny

write a letter to your class teacher expressing your views about online teaching​

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Answer:

Dear miss _____, as I learn more and experience online schooling I think it is better. With online schooling you are able to sleep in rather than waking up early to go to school, you don’t have to worry about the weather or what to wear because you are at home, and you also get to eat whenever you want rather than having to wait for lunch to start. So overall I think that online schooling is better than public education.

Explanation:

Arrange the events of the big bang in sequential order.

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Answer: 1. The universe comes into existence as a single point.

It is considered that the universe was created as a very hot and dense and as a single point in space.

2.  The universe begins expanding, and nuclear forces develop.

The four fundamental forces: electromagnetism, weak nuclear force, strong nuclear force and gravity were formed.

3. Atomic nuclei form.

Universe started to expand, became cooler and less dense. Protons and neutrons collided to make deuterium - an isotope of hydrogen

4. Hydrogen fuses into helium.  

Formed deuterium atoms combined to form helium.

5. The first neutral atoms form  

When matter in the universe cooled enough, electrons combined with nuclei to form neutral atoms

6. The universe is transparent.

In the phase "recombination," the absorption of free electrons caused the universe to become transparent.

7. Gases form that will later go on to shape the stars and galaxies.  

This is the phase of reionization, where gases collapsed enough to form the very first stars and galaxies.  

Explanation:

should proboly change a few words here and there

Answer:

now that is quite impresive.

Explanation:

Q : Complete the dialogues with the phrases in the box. Some phrases can be used more than once and some phrases are useless they don't come in any blank . 1. A: What did u have in lunch ? B: A ________ bread and a bowl of soup." 2: A: Did you like my new phone? B: Yes, it's an amazing ________ technology . 3. A: How many bags do you have ? B: I've got two __________ luggage. Word box : bar of , bowl of ,cup of ,game of piece of , slice of . please tell me the answer who gave the correct will get reward of brainiest.

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Answer:

Completion of the dialogues with phrases in the box:

1. A: What did u have in lunch ? B: A ___slice of_____ bread and a bowl of soup."

2: A: Did you like my new phone? B: Yes, it's an amazing __piece of______ technology .

3. A: How many bags do you have ? B: I've got two ___pieces of_______ luggage.

Explanation:

a) Data: Word box : bar of , bowl of ,cup of ,game of piece of , slice of

b) Luggage is luggage in singular or plural form.  Often, to quantify it, we use "piece."  When luggages are used, they refer to various collections or types of luggage. Similarly, bread is bread in singular or plural form.  To quantity it, we use "slice" or loaf," depending on the sense of usage.

Which analysis of the passage is correct? 1. it contains two compound sentences and one complex sentence

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Answer:

It contains two compound sentences and one complex sentence.

Explanation:

The passage you were given is the following:

All the students signed a petition, but they still needed the faculty's permission to start the club. The students came to the next faculty meeting, and they presented a solid argument. All of their hard work paid off because the students won their campaign.

The options you were given are:

It contains two compound sentences and one complex sentence.It contains one compound sentence and two complex sentences. It contains three compound sentences. It contains three complex sentences.

An independent clause is a clause that can stand alone as a sentence. Every sentence must contain a subject and predicate and express a complete thought. Unlike independent clauses, dependent clauses can't stand alone because they lack at least one of these elements.

A compound sentence is a sentence that consists of at least two independent clauses connected by a comma, conjunction, or semicolon.

A complex sentence is a sentence that consists of one independent clause and at least one dependent clause.

Based on this information, we can conclude that the given passage contains two compound sentences and one complex sentence. The first two sentences are compound sentences. Each of them consists of two independent clauses. The third one is a complex sentence that consists of one independent and one dependent clause.

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From The Book: Maze Runner
Do you feel Thomas is different from the other boys? Explain with specific details from the text

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Answer:

yes

Explanation:

because he's like the only immune person

9) Whose fault is it that William re-injures his knee as a junior? What does William’s brother-in-law say this shows about “the system”?

10) Describe the relationship between Arthur and his dad after his father returns from a year away from the family.

11) What message does film-maker Spike Lee have for William and the other young men at the all-American summer basketball camp?

12) What kinds of things does Marquette University do to entice William to sign with them?

13) Compare and contrast Marshall’s Coach Bedford with St. Joseph’s Coach Pingatore. What do they have in common? How are they different in the way they coach? Who would you rather play for and why?

14) Think of Arthur’s background and situation heading into college. Will he have a chance at upward social mobility or not? Explain.

15) Think of William’s background and situation heading into college. Will he have a chance at upward social mobility or not? Explain.

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Answer:

Good luck

Explanation:

2(2x - 6) and 4(x - 3)
How are the two expressions different?
How are they alike?

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4x -12 and 4x -12
They are the same equation
They are set up different

Charlie made friends easily because of his innate warmth and good cheer.

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Answer:

The sentence is grammatically correct.

Explanation:

You didn't ask a question so I'm going to assume that's what you needed.

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Hi there, I am looking for information about how to use Up,Off,Out,Down,and away and phrase verbs please like Call up or even Cleaning up like those verbs please help to explain how can i use and where I need to use please. ​

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Answer:

This is actually quite tricky.

In the simplest form, they are most commonly used with verbs of motion. An example would be "Climbing down" or "Putting away". Usually, many of these would be able to connect with said verb (Climbing Up/Down/Off).

Granted, while some can be used after a verb with no problem, other combinations need further additions to the idea, otherwise they become ungrammatical.

For example:

While some may need additions (Usually by adding nouns after the preposition):

"I walked up" -Ungrammatical

"I walked up the staircase. -Grammatical

Others will do fine without any, as they express a complete idea:

"I cleaned up" -Grammatical

"I cleaned up the house" -Grammatical

There are even irregulars. These ones modify the meaning in slightly different ways.

"Cool off/down"

"warm up"

Then the weirder ones that may be rephrased and would still be grammatical such as:

"I ran up the stairs"

"I ran the stairs up"

You may even want to play with prepositions vs. phrasal verbs such as:

"He ran up a hill" (up is a preposition)

"He ran up a big bill" (ran up is a phrasal verb)

Granted, while these may not have been possible before, the rule of language is that its interpretation is based on what the vast majority view it as.

While there are some rules you might be able to follow, some of it just depends on semantics.

which is a backdrop
dog
people
beach
park

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a backdrop is a scene or scenery, so beach or park.

Answer:

Park and the Beach

Explanation:

A speaker says:
And you don't have to do it, like, if you don't want to.
Which of the following is the correct way to transcribe this according to our Clean Verbatim Style
A) You do not have to do it if you do not want to.
B) And you don't have to do it, like, if you don't want to.
C) And you don't have to do it if you don't want to.

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Answer:

C

Explanation:

You leave the and because that is what the speaker said. Take out the word like because of the informal speech rules in the style guide

Option C) And you don't have to do it if you don't want to.

What is Transcribeme clean verbatim style?

Clean Verbatim

Your text is transcribed and all filler words are removed, such as: hmm, you know, like, etc. We also clean up stutters and stammers, as well as filler words. For example: “It was, like, you know, a pretty boring experience” is changed to read: “It was a pretty boring experience.”

What does it mean to transcribe verbatim?

A verbatim transcript captures every single word from an audio file in text, exactly the same way those words were originally spoken.

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Prompt
The original article in Outside magazine from which the book is based, garnered an unprecedented amount of reader
response toward both author and subject. What do you think it is about this young man and the story told about him that
motivated so many people to voice their opinions?
<< Read Less
(no artlicle included)

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Hello. The article that this question refers to is related to the book "Into the Wild".

Answer:

The story motivated people to express their opinions because it was a complex story, with several layers and capable of developing different feelings about the narrative.

Explanation:

The story stimulated different opinions in the readers and because it is an intriguing, complex and layered narrative, the readers felt stimulated to discuss it and to present their divergent opinions. some readers found the narrative intelligent, innovative and insightful, while others found it exaggerated, unrealistic and irresponsible.

The following came out of Islam:

the architectural form of the basilica
the teaching that Muhammed was the son of God
a significant amount of your mathematics
translations of ancient works

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Answer:

translations of ancient works

Explanation:

Answer:

a significant amount of your mathematics

Explanation:

just fnished assigment

Ln describing her family's responses to Shannon's illness, Johnson presents three reactions Maddie's, Sam's, and her own. How do these responses differ?

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Hello. This question is about the short story "Bombs Bursting In Air"

Answer and Explanation:

Shannon's disease, a brain tumor, took everyone by surprise, but it provoked different reactions in the family of the storyteller. She, being an adult, had an apprehensive and sad reaction, as she knew that this would be a very difficult time that Shannon's family would go through and that there was no certainty that Shannon would recover and be without sequelae, returning to being a happy child and happy.

Maddie, being a child and having a positive view of things, reacted as if Shannon was going through a common illness, which would soon recover and that everything would be fine, for sure.

Sam, being an older child, was a little more apprehensive, he knew that this disease might not be so simple and asked his mother if Shannon would be okay, relying on the word of an adult, to calm his thoughts.

Read the passage below.

Brushing brambles and vines away from her face, Meredith pushed her way into the dense foliage. From time to time, she heard the shrill calls of birds or the flutter of insects around her, but her eyes remained focused on the ground, following the footprints in the soft earth. Feeling a pinch, she looked down to see what appeared to be a twig on her leg, but as she brushed it off, a tiny dot of blood appeared in its place. Turning back to the footprint trail, she moved farther from the people on the trail, focused only on the goal of finding Ben.

What example of foreshadowing is created by a discovery in the background of the above passage?


A ....she moved farther from the people on the trail...
B. ...her eyes remained focused on the ground, following the footprints in the soft earth.
C. ...Meredith pushed her way into the dense foliage.
D. ...as she brushed it off, a tiny dot of blood appeared in its place.

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Answer:

I believe this is D for foreshadowing.

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What makes a subject or element a suitable target for parody?

It is complex in form and structure.
It is controversial and debatable.
It is easily recognized.

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Answer:

original work, genre, artist, or figure.

Answer:

Its controversial and debatable :)))

Explanation:

Can someone please finish this for me?! Will give heart ❤️ Part 2

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Answer:

it mostly depends on the book but say harry potter the book was very

diffrent from the movie in the way time passed and a few of the room designs  

Explanation:

What gesture does Scrooge act out when the boy sings “Away in a Manger?”
ANSWER FAST PLZ DUE IN 5 MIN

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Answer:

I can't remember the story well but I think he was annoyed

Explanation:

Read the sentence from “Initiation.”

And from that time on, initiations didn't bother Millicent at all.

Which revision of this sentence best uses direct characterization?

Millicent’s tense posture evaporated, replaced by a genuine smile.
Upon reflection, Millicent realized that initiations didn’t really bother her.
Thereafter, Millicent said yes to each initiation task without question.
Millicent found that handling the tasks was much easier than she’d thought.

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Answer:

Millicent’s tense posture evaporated, replaced by a genuine smile.

Explanation:

In literature, the term characterization refers to the process in which a writer creates and describes their characters. There are two main types of characterization:

Direct characterization - the writer explicitly describes the character.Indirect characterization - we find out more about the character through their actions, thoughts, appearance, interaction with other characters.

The revision of the given sentence that best uses direct characterization is the first one. The writer directly describes Millicent's posture. In the rest of the options, we can see Millicent's thoughts, words, and actions. This is how indirect characterization works, which is why these options are incorrect.

Answer:

a

Explanation:

What are the two major sources for the practices of the Elizabethan stage?

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Answer:

i think you mean religion and if its that then the two major religions in Elizabethan England were the Catholic and Protestant religions.

Explanation:

30 POINTS!!!! 1.What kind of word would be appropriate for a formal essay?
a contraction

slang or jargon

one-syllable

challenging

2.To articulate your thoughts and ideas effectively, what should you understand about expressing them?

formal

discussion

context

informal

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Answer:

1.challenging

2.discussion

Explanation:

The word that would be appropriate for a formal essay is challenging. Thus option D is correct.

To articulate your thoughts and ideas effectively, you should understand about expressing them through discussion. Thus option B is appropriate.

What is an Essay?

An essay is a piece of literature that throws light on a particular subject by determining the facts and figures related to that to provide information to the reader.

While contractions are frequently employed in speech, there are some instances where they are particularly useful. Since they might make your writing sound unstructured, contractions are typically discouraged in scholarly work, such as a research report.

The exchange of information between two people in the form of conversation, opinion, suggestion, or advice with the use of a medium or direct interaction is referred to as communication which helps in expressing things.

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Which is a trait of a technical text?


(A )Describes problems and solutions about experimental procedures

(B )Provides information and instruction on how to perform a task or procedure

(C )Uses mainly chronological order or cause and effect text structure

(D )Written as events in a timeline to show when they occurred over time

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Answer: B)

Explanation:

A technical text is considering the type of text that has the intention to educate the individual that is reading it in one particular special subject or skill that the reader wants to learn or inform himself. That is why they are describing information and usually, instruction on how to do something and that is why B) is the correct answer.

Answers A, C, and D are not considering technical text characteristics because there are no instructions or information in those answers and those are two main characteristics of a technical text.

Think about the problem Elijah described at the beginning of the lesson. He needs to take steps to analyze the problem more deeply and to try to solve it. Have you ever had a problem that you needed to analyze in order to solve it? Describe the problem. Then explain the steps you took to solve it. Were you satisfied with the solution? Write your response in about 100 to 150 words.

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Answer and Explanation:

1. I already had a problem that I had to analyze many things to solve it. This problem happened when my parents separated and I had to choose whether to live with my mom or dad. This decision seemed to be a problem for me because it had many elements at stake and my decision, whatever it was, could promote advantages and disadvantages for me.

2. To solve this problem, I had to first talk to each of my parents, to make sure they wanted me to live with them. In addition, I needed to talk to them so that each one would not be upset by my decision. Then I analyzed every advantage and disadvantage that each decision would impose on my life. After that, I assessed which decision had the most advantage and whether those advantages outweighed the disadvantages. After that I made my decision.

3. I decided to live with my mother and I did not regret it, although I see my father often. Despite a few disadvantages living with my mother is satisfactory, which shows that I made the right decision, thanks to the steps I took to make the decision.

Please answer quickly!! Read the following lines from "The Human Drift and define the words in bold. Use context clues to determine the meanings
1. These migratory movements of peoples have been called drifts, and the word is apposite
2. Retreating before stronger breeds, hungry and voracious, the Eskimo has drifted to the inhospitable polar regions
3. Perhaps most amazing has been the South Sea Drift Blind, fortuitous, precarious as no other drift has been

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Answer:

1. These migratory movements of peoples have been called drifts, and the word is apposite.

Apposite: is an adjective that means suitable or to the point.

2. Retreating before stronger breeds, hungry and voracious, the Eskimo has drifted to the inhospitable polar regions.

Voracious: is an adjective that means insatiable, that the person or animal eats a lot.

3. Perhaps most amazing has been the South Sea Drift Blind, fortuitous, precarious as no other drift has been

Fortuitous: is an adjective that means that something that was not planned happened. It happened by chance.

Explanation:

All the words are adjectives that are modifying a noun.

We can deduce the meaning of the word apposite because it refers to the name that migratory movement has, and if we think about drift, we conclude that apposite means suitable.

We can know the meaning of voracious mainly because it is with hungry, and it is referring to strong breeds, which is a word that can be related to ingesting large quantities of food.

We can know what fortuitous means by analyzing the context where it says that it was amazing and as no other drift has been. It happened by chance, was unpredictable and astonishing.

Answer:

Apposite- relevant, applicable

Voracious- extreme appetite or hunger

Fortuitous- random/by chance,

Precarious- uncertain/dangerous

Explanation:

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Select all that apply.

Proofread the following written conversation carefully. Identify the types of errors the writer made.

"So what are you going to do tonight?" asked Mario.
I dont know, replied Emily.
"are you thinking of going to the football game? asked Mario.
"Maybe. Yes, I think that I will," said Emily.

Possible errors are: _____.

using quotation marks around an indirect quote
failure to use quotation marks where needed
using the wrong punctuation for a title
using a comma incorrectly
failure to use an apostrophe where needed

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Answer: B defiantly and I think D but I am not sure.

Explanation:

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