Grade my argumentative essay from the rubric in the photo. For example, what do you give my reasoning out of 4 points or what do you give my evidence out of 4 points. Make sure you grade all in the rubric. Please be honest. Thank you and have a great day :)

Answer:

dont you have to indent when you start a paragraph? Every thing else seems good to me

Explanation:

I think it sounds a little too repetitive. Maybe you should try replacing some of the parts that say "texting while walking" with something else. Also, you need more commas. For example, your essay says, "In the text it says". There should be a comma before it and after text.  

Claim: I would give you a 4.

Evidence: 3.5 (commas)

Reasoning: 4

Counter Argument: I think you could expand on why people think they shouldn't ban texting while walking. I see that you addressed the opposite opinion on it, but continued explaining why it should be illegal. I would suggest expanding more on the opposing side and what makes them think that texting isn't a problem while walking. I would give you a 2.5 on this currently.

Conventions: 3.5

Please help me I will give brainless and a lot of points.

Read the paragraph from Max's journal entry about his sister.
Max wants to use less formal language in his journal.
Which of these sentences is an appropriate replacement for She is a great little sister, but she really irritates me when she takes toys
out of my room.?
A)
Sarah is a great little sister, but she really annoys me when she takes toys
out of my room.
B)
She really irks me when she takes toys out of my room even though she's a
great little sister
C)
She is a great little sister, but she is a pain in the neck when she takes toys
out of my room.
D)
Although she is a great little sister, she really aggravates me when she
takes toys out of my room.

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Which sentence contains a detail that best supports
De Sean's claim?
sentence 1
O sentence 2
O sentence 3
O sentence 4


The answer is D Sentence 4

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This paragraph is an example of
Casper's heart sank as the sun began to set. But, just
then, he heard a small scuffling noise. Could it be
Macy? After many hours searching for the family's
terrier puppy, his hope was almost gone.
exposition.
rising action.
climax.
falling action.
There it was again. The same scuffling sound coming
from behind an old fence. His feet took flight, and his
blood pounded in his ears. "Macy!” he cried. "Where
are you?”

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b. Wow, I love my new book!
c. No, you can’t have more cake.
d. Yuck! This tastes awful!

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-install more smoke detectors in their homes
-read about the physical effects of smoking.
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WHEN YOU
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What kinds of mistakes do you see in the passage?
Which ones are easier to fix and which are harder?
Which mistakes do you think spell check would catch, and which ones would go unnoticed?
What are spelling and spell check strategies that can be used for success in your future writings?
Be sure to follow correct paragraph structure, and apply what you have learned about spelling and spell check.

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A: he, she, it

B: them, those, their.

C: I, my, we, our and you.

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