This journal entry will be completed in two parts. In this lesson, you will examine how different sentence types can add variety and interest to writing. Part of your learning will involve revising your own writing to improve sentence variety.

Now, before continuing with the lesson, you will complete the first half of your entry. Write a short, four- to five-sentence paragraph about a topic of your choosing.

Then, after you have completed this lesson, come back to the paragraph you wrote. Analyze your writing to identify areas where you could revise using different sentence types to add interest to your work. Revise the paragraph using the techniques you have learned. Your completed journal entry should have both your original and your revised paragraph.

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Answer 1

Answer:

After reading the labels, I think we don't need soda, candy and ice cream because it can affect your health. Breakfast cereal, Canned and frozen fruit are the most nutrient food. Cereal will provide you some source of sugar and energy in the morning, canned and frozen fruit will provide you the most nutrient during the day and evening. Ice cream, candy bar and soda are the least nutritious food because they have excessive amount of sugar and it's not good for your health to consume a lot of sugar in a day.

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PART A:
In “Nicholas’s Diary: April 2 and 3,” What is Nicholas’s first thought when he and his farther leave home to go treasure hunting?

1. It is not going to be the type of treasure hunt that he thought it would be

2.The treasure will be carefully hidden and closely guarded

3.he will not have a very good story to tell his friends at practice on Monday

4.he will not be finding gold or silvers, but something far more important


PART B:
Which sentence from the text best supports the answer in part A?

A. “ dad and I left early in the morning and headed for the same woods that we sometimes go hiking in on Sunday’s”

B: “As dad kept his eyes on the GPS, I looked around and suddenly I noticed a latch of leaves that was disturbed and a log that looked like it had been moved”

C: “ The forest was like a statue; it was still in covered in damp moss and dead leaves; it didn’t even see alive.”

D: “..... what was really odd was when dad told me to leave the shovels at home because he said we wouldn’t need them”

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Answer: The first one Is 1 the second is c

Explanation:

Is this a complete sentence? Diphtheria is rare in North America and Europe, it's still common in countries without readily available vaccinations.

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Answer:

y e s

Explanation:

I'm the first section, how does the author define musical copyright infringement?

A:by describing the different causes of musical copyright infringement.

B:by giving examples of two different forms of musical copyright infringement

C:by comparing and contrasting plagiarism to sampling

D:by looking at the effects of plagiarizing an essay and a song.​

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Answer:

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Answer:

B: by describing the different forms of musical copyright infringement.

Explanation:

• What does Fred Bayles think is the proper role of parents in the debate on teenage driving? How do you know this? Give examples from the text.

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Answer:

That parents should be more protective over their child and make sure they don't go pass there curfew.

Explanation:

Help please
What is the most likely connotation of the word firm in the following
sentence?
When it comes to sportsmanship, Coach Kate is very firm in making
sure that we shake our opponents' hands.
A. A positive connotation that means Coach Kate stands up for what
she believes in
B. A negative connotation that means Coach Kate is bossy and
demanding
C. A negative connotation that means Coach Kate has a bad attitude
D. A positive connotation that means Coach Kate persuades people
easily

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Answer:

A

Explanation:

Answer:

A. A positive connotation that means Coach Kate stands up for what

she believes in

Explanation:

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Read this excerpt from a news article and then answer the question that follows:

Don't look to the Supreme Court for purple prose

WASHINGTON (AP) (99071391728)

The Supreme Court justices are nine smart men and women. But when it comes to writing, there's not a Shakespeare, Hemingway or even John Grisham among them.

``Trying to pick between the justices in majority opinion writing is rather like asking me whether I prefer Miracle Whip or mayonnaise,'' says Indiana University law professor Charles Geyh. ``You will rarely see what I regard as good writing in Supreme Court opinions.''

[…]

Most of the justices' opinions were no threat to the late Justice Oliver Wendell Holmes and other great opinion writers of the past.

Consider this gem, also by Scalia, in a decision in January involving the Federal Communications Commission's regulation of local telephone business:

``Respondents argue that avoiding this pari passu expansion of commission jurisdiction with expansion of the substantive scope of the act was the reason the `nothing shall be construed' provision was framed in the alternative: `nothing in this act shall be construed to apply or to give the commission jurisdiction' (emphasis added) with respect to the forbidden subjects.''

Got that?

What does the author want the reader to understand from the line in bold?

Supreme Court Justices are expected to be talented writers.

Supreme Court Justices are often quite talented writers.

Supreme Court Justices work hard to make their writing good.

Supreme Court Justices are not usually talented writers.

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Answer:

D.

Explanation:

The Answer is D. Trust me

from Sense and Sensibility – CHAPTER IV
by Jane Austen

"What a pity it is, Elinor," said Marianne, "that Edward should have no taste for drawing."
"No taste for drawing!" replied Elinor, "why should you think so? He does not draw himself, indeed, but he has great pleasure in seeing the performances of other people, and I assure you he is by no means deficient in natural taste, though he has not had opportunities of improving it. Had he ever been in the way of learning, I think he would have drawn very well. He distrusts his own judgment in such matters so much, that he is always unwilling to give his opinion on any picture; but he has an innate propriety and simplicity of taste, which in general direct him perfectly right."
Marianne was afraid of offending, and said no more on the subject; but the kind of approbation which Elinor described as excited in him by the drawings of other people, was very far from that rapturous delight, which, in her opinion, could alone be called taste. Yet, though smiling within herself at the mistake, she honoured her sister for that blind partiality to Edward which produced it.
"I hope, Marianne," continued Elinor, "you do not consider him as deficient in general taste. Indeed, I think I may say that you cannot, for your behaviour to him is perfectly cordial, and if that were your opinion, I am sure you could never be civil to him."
Marianne hardly knew what to say. She would not wound the feelings of her sister on any account, and yet to say what she did not believe was impossible. At length she replied:
"Do not be offended, Elinor, if my praise of him is not in every thing equal to your sense of his merits. I have not had so many opportunities of estimating the minuter propensities of his mind, his inclinations and tastes, as you have; but I have the highest opinion in the world of his goodness and sense. I think him every thing that is worthy and amiable."
"I am sure," replied Elinor, with a smile, "that his dearest friends could not be dissatisfied with such commendation as that and I do not perceive how you could express yourself more warmly." Marianne was rejoiced to find her sister so easily pleased.
"Of his sense and his goodness," continued Elinor, "no one can, I think, be in doubt, who has seen him often enough to engage him in unreserved conversation. The excellence of his understanding and his principles can be concealed only by that shyness which too often keeps him silent and you know enough of him to do justice to his solid worth. But of his minuter propensities, as you call them you have from peculiar circumstances been kept more ignorant than myself. He and I have been at times thrown a good deal together, while you have been wholly engrossed on the most affectionate principle by my mother and I have seen a great deal of him, have studied his sentiments and heard his opinion on subjects of literature and taste; and, upon the whole, I venture to pronounce that his mind is well–informed, enjoyment of books exceedingly great, his imagination lively, his observation just and correct, and his taste delicate and pure. His abilities in every respect improve as much upon acquaintance as his manners and person. At first sight, his address is certainly not striking; and his person can hardly be called handsome, till the expression of his eyes, which are uncommonly good, and the general sweetness of his countenance, is perceived. At present, I know him so well, that I think him really handsome; or at least, almost so. What say you, Marianne?"
"I shall very soon think him handsome, Elinor, if I do not now. When you tell me to love him as a brother, I shall no more see imperfection in his face, than I now do in his heart."

Which two sentences show how the author develops the theme of love through Elinor's characterization?

A. Elinor is blind to Marianne's criticism of Edward.
B. Elinor decides to change Marianne's mind by being rude and stubborn.
C. Elinor rejects Marianne's opinion of Edward.
D. Elinor defends Edward by listing the traits that she has observed in him.
E. Elinor states that Edward is the most handsome man in England.

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Answer:

B

Explanation:

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Answer:

B.Elinor decides to change Mariannes' mind by being rude and stubborn.

Explanation:

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Which of the following sentences uses proper punctuation?

They asked me "What I wanted," and I finally said, "I don't know!"

They asked me what I wanted, and I finally said, "I don't know!"

They asked me "What I wanted", and I finally said, "I don't know"!

They asked me what I wanted, and I finally said, "I don't know"!

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Answer:

B). They asked me what I wanted, and I finally said, "I don't know!"

Explanation:

The second option is correctly punctuated as it employs the comma(,), the exclamation mark(!), and the inverted commas("...") aptly. As per the rule, the reported words like 'they asked me what I wanted...said' are not written inside the inverted commas but the exact words "I don't know!" are. The other punctuation marks like a full stop, exclamation marks, etc. are put inside the inverted commas. Thus, option B is the correct answer.

1. What is an example of a character trait?

Generosity

Integrity

Loyalty

All of the above​

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Answer:

all of the above

Explanation:

What is your definition of a good school?

What are the top of three qualities of a good/successful school? Why?how do you know?

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Answer:

Explanation:

A clear and shared focus. ...

High standards and expectations for all students. ...

Effective school leadership. ...

High levels of collaboration and communication. ...

Curriculum, instruction and assessments aligned with state standards. ...

Frequent monitoring of learning and teaching. ...

Focused professional development.

As it is used in paragraph 2, the word “profound” most nearly means:

A.
Generous and kind

B.
Complex and intense

C.
Foolish and impulsive

D.
Uncomplicated and effortless

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I am assuming B here

How many pages are in the book shattered by Teri Terry?

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402 i’m pretty sure. paperback right

Answer:

It says there is 402 pages on AUS/UK edition of Shattered. Barnes and Nobles lists 336 pages, though.

Explanation:

The one and only Ivan questions

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Answer:

ask god

Explanation:

Based on this information, what can be concluded about the Venezuelan people's access to news?​

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Answer:

Venezuela is a South American nation located on the shores of the Caribbean Sea, which since the end of the 20th century has been governed by a dictatorial process (hidden under a supposed democracy) called "Bolivarian Revolution", established by the late Hugo Chavez and today led by his successor, Nicolas Maduro.

As a consequence of this situation, the political, civil and economic freedoms of the citizens of Venezuela have been cut off, which has generated not only a huge poverty rate but also a general economic crisis and a wave of Venezuelan migrants fleeing to other countries.

However, most of the media do not reproduce the information of this situation, since they are media controlled directly by the government, and respond to its interests. As a consequence, Venezuelans also suffer from serious misinformation about the consequences of the acts carried out by the government, in addition to a lack of freedom regarding access to knowledge and information emanating from the press.

“How altered our malls might be each year if these were just a little different”?
What does the author mean?

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Answer:

it means how diffrent it would be withouht ?

Explanation:

Read this sentence:

The cat's intentions were quite sinister. It planned to stalk, kill, and eat the neighbor's parakeet. Based on this text, sinister most likely means which of the following? A) Brilliant B) Clever C) Evil D) Natural

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Answer:

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Explanation:

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C. Evil

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D. Natural

Read this sentence:

The cat's intentions were quite sinister. It planned to stalk, kill, and eat the neighbor's parakeet. Based on this text, sinister most likely means which of the following? A) Brilliant B) Clever C) Evil D) Natural

What figurative language is used in this line? (Only one of the answer choices)

"She bore a mind that envy could not but call fair"

Hyperbole

Metaphor

Simile

Personification

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Answer:

The answer is A. Hyperbole.

What is Oedipus's attitude toward the suppliants?

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Answer:

Oedipus' approach towards the cure of the plague, makes for certain uses of dramatic irony that put the reader further into line with the action on stage. Oedipus firmly forbids the people of his country to receive that man (King Laius the killer) or to speak to him, no matter who he is.

Can someone please summarize this in your on words

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Answer:

Explanation:

A resource that animal agriculture is deeply dependent on is water. One third of the planets fresh water is put into use because of the meat and dairy industry. In the United States approximately five percent of water-use is considered domestic and fifty five percent of these liquids are put into animal agriculture. Part of the fifty five percent of the water is also the water that’s given to the animals every day. The amount varies depending on the size of the animals and the environmental settings that take place. An example of this can be a cow that’ll drink an average of thirty gallons of water each day.

Which of the following is not a form of text-based media?
O A. Speeches
B. Diaries
c. News programs
D. Blogs

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Answer:

A

text based means that it can be read. diaries, news programs, and blogs can all be read. speeches, however, are entirely verbal and are not text based.

Answer: C

News programs

Explanation:

Analysis Outline Template
1. Write your outline using complete sentences.
2. Roman numeral I should be your thesis statement in response to the writing prompt. 3.Outline two body paragraphs- 1 paragraph about King’s language and 1 paragraph about King’s structure (Roman numerals II and III) 4. You need to introduce and include at least two pieces of supporting evidence per topic sentence by summarizing, paraphrasing, and/or directly quoting the text (letters A and C). Be sure to cite the paragraph where you get your evidence from!
5. Evidence needs to be explained in your sentence outline (letters B and D).
6. Remember to use the stop light approach (green = topic sentence, yellow = evidence/example, and red =

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Answer:

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Explanation:

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change them to appropriate voice form.
1)it was built some years ago.
2)were you binding the paper?
3)the woman with no teeth wants new dentures.
4)she teaches us english.​

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Answer:

Plz make this answer brainlisted.

Explanation:

1. They built it some years ago.

2. Was the paper being bound by you?

3. A new denture is wanted by the woman with no teeth.

4. We are taught English by her.

Which of the following is not an example of evidence in informative writing?

a My friends and I agree that makeup is a personal choice for each girl.

b Dove aired a television campaign to reveal the effects of makeup.

c The average American woman spends $15,000 on makeup in her lifetime.

d A professional makeup artist says, “Women wear makeup for themselves.”

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Answer:

b Dove aired a television campaign to reveal the effects of makeup.

Explanation:

An informative writing is a form of writing that informs the readers about a certain topic. It does not contain or include any personal opinions or try to influence or persuade the readers.

Among the given sentences, sentence (b) is an informative writing for it presents an informational detail about the television campaign that reveals the effects of make-up. The other sentences contain opinions about the topic of their respective sentences, thus making them incorrect/ not informative writing.

Answer: B

Explanation:

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With Arizona's diverse topography, the temperature average for southern Arizona, including the Phoenix
metropolitan area, is lows of 30°F in the winter to over 100°F in the summer. In the northern portion of the
state, the temperature fluctuates from 20°F to 95°F. The highest temperature recorded was 127°F. The lowest
temperature recorded was -40°F. With such extreme highs and lows, what can people do to consistently
lower global warming in this state? Think in terms of the environment.

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Answer:

Arizona will always high an extremely high energy consumption, and there is nothing to do about it. This is because it is a state that is part of a very developed country (the U.S.), standards of living are therefore high, and the climate and the shape of the cities make the use of air conditioning and cars, mandatory.

Explanation:

For this reason, instead of trying to reduce energy consumption, Arizona should promote a fast energy transition instead. The state should be dotted with solar energy and wind plants everywhere, since the majority of the territory is uninhabited desert. The state could even build nuclear power plants because nuclear is a realiable and cheap source of clean energy.

In conclusion, instead of trying to lower energy consumption, Arizona should make energy consumption come from clean and sustainable sources.

Which of these should you check for when revising the paragraphs of an interpretive essay on a poem?

A. Does each paragraph paraphrase the arguments of the essay?
B. Does each paragraph sum up the gist of the essay in one sentence?
C. Does each paragraph flow smoothly and logically into the next?
D. Do all sentences in a paragraph directly echo the thesis statement?

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Answer:

Explanation:

B

_______ A poem with 14 lines and a specific rhyme scheme _______ Verse with an irregular rhythm and no specific meter _______ Giving human attributes to nonhuman objects

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Answer:

Explanation:1. Comic Verse

2. Anthropomorphism

Answer:

Sonnet

Free verse

Personification

Explanation:

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What is a comma hug?
A. A comma hug is formed by placing one comma before and one after a phrase that is necessary to complete the sentence
B. A comma hug is formed by placing one comma before and one after a phrase that is unnecessary to complete the sentence
C. A comma hug is formed by placing one apostrophe before and one after a phrase that is unnecessary to complete the sentence.
D. A comma hug is formed by placing one apostrophe before and one after a phrase that is necessary to complete the sentence.

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Answer:

B.

Explanation:

A comma hug is formed by placing one comma before and one after a phrase that is unnecessary to complete the sentence

Where is the x-intercept located?

(–4, 0)
(0, –4)
(0, 4)
(4, 0)

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The answer is either the first or last one all X intercepts have a Y of zero, you did not give enough information to determine if it is negative or positive for the X value but if the X intercept is on the left side of the Y axis that means that it is the first answer if it is on the right side it is the last answer.

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Can someone please write me an essay about fashion for grade 10-12please

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Answer:

-2

Explanation:

10-12= -2

Why did O'Connor lock herself in a room and thrash her fists when she was a child?
a.
The nuns enforced penance on her.
c.
She was "fighting" her guardian angel.
b.
It was a side effect of medication she had to take for her illness.
d.
She was trying to come up with material for her stories.

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Answer:

C. She was "fighting" her guardian angel.

Explanation:

O'Connor locked herself in a room and thrash her fists when she was a child because she had a medical condition which made her thrash her fist across the room.

She did this with the knowledge that she was "FIGHTING" her guardian angel.

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