What is one way to revise for word choice?

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Answer 1

Answer:

Thinking about the reader and their expectations will also help you make better decisions. As word choice is important, reviewing the evaluative modifiers is one way to revise for word choice.

Answer 2
One way to revise for word choice is to check for appropriate level of language.

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What is worse, hate or indifference? Explain your answer. (1 paragraph, 5 sentences minimum)

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Answer:

indifference  is worse

Explanation:

When experiencing or witnessing a betrayal, a hurt, an injustice or a loss there is something worse than anger.The opposite of love is not hate, it's indifference. The opposite of art is not ugliness, it's indifference.  And the opposite of life is not death, it's indifference.

when you hate someone, at least you have/ know ur feelings while indifference is not caring

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All of the following names were invented by Shakespeare except for which one?



Miranda


Jessica


Olivia


Allison

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Answer:

D. Allison

Explanation:

Shakespeare didn't invent the name Allison

You have started reading Antigone. You may encounter words that you are unfamiliar with. What is a context clue and how can you use it to your advantage when reading?

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Context clues are when you take a look to find hints or clues to find the definition of the word you are unfamiliar with. Most of the time, you look for a word near the unfamiliar one, and it might end up having a similar meaning. You can use this to you’re advantage by trying to figure out the definitions of new words without looking them up.

The parentheses portion of the sentence is a ?

The harsh wind sourced the scant remaining leaves from the trees, (and a desolate landscape remained in its wake)

A. A coordinating conjunction

B. A dependent clause

C. An independent clause

D. A subordinating conjunction

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Answer: C. an independent clause (A. a coordinating conjunction) Explanation: Although nothing is underlined, I think the question stiil can be answered. But first, a quick revision. Independent clause is the one that conveys a complete thought and contains enough information to stand on its own. On the othet hand, dependent clause can only express a meaning if it is linked to an independent clause via the subordinating conjunction. In our sentence, both clauses, "The harsh wind scoured the scant remaining leaves from the trees" and "A desolate landscape remained in its wake" are independent clauses and as such they are linked together via a coordinating conjunction "and". So, if any of these two clauses is underlined then the correct answer is "independent clause". However, if the conjunction "and" is underlined, then the answer is "coordinating conjunction".

read the sentence. During the epidemic, early warnings circulated widely. which correctly analyzes each word’s part of speech in the sentence

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Answer:

I am not completely sure what you are asking. But here is my best shot.

During - time, it tells what is happening while

the - is a preposition

epidemic - what is happening (relates to the first question)

early - when it is happening

warnings - the noun/subject

widely - where it is going

This is a standard form of speech.

Complete the sentence using will/won't or may/might.
1. I _____ visit you when I come to Mexico. I'm not sure.
2. I probably _____ study engineering in college. It's a field that interests me.
3. It's raining, so we _____ go swimming today.
4. _____ you and Chris get married in the future?
5. My friend are going the movies. I _____ go with them, but I'm not sure yet.
6. The banks _____ be open on Monday because it's a holiday.
7. Toshiro _____ definitely get the job because he speaks Japanese.
8. Kara _____ get a full-time job after hight school, but her plans aren't certain.​

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Answer:

1. I may visit you when I come to Mexico. I'm not sure.

visit you when I come to Mexico. I'm not sure.2. I probably will study engineering in college. It's a field that interests me.

study engineering in college. It's a field that interests me.3. It's raining, so we won't go swimming today.

go swimming today.4. Will you and Chris get married in the future?

you and Chris get married in the future?5. My friend are going the movies. I may go with them, but I'm not sure yet.

go with them, but I'm not sure yet.6. The banks won't be open on Monday because it's a holiday.

be open on Monday because it's a holiday.7. Toshiro will definitely get the job because he speaks Japanese.

definitely get the job because he speaks Japanese.8. Kara might get a full-time job after hight school, but her plans aren't certain.

Explanation:

This is all correct!

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Read the passage.


Looking back, I suppose my life started with that letter. I don’t think everything necessarily happens for a reason—there’s too much tragedy in the world for that. But there’s no doubt that some misfortunes turn into pivotal moments that can alter the course of a person’s life for the better. Alma and I have been together for 30 years now, and I still wonder what that other life—the one in which my letter said “congratulations”—might look like. I expect it would have been pretty grand, full of its own triumphs and pitfalls. My children are fresh to the adult world, and when I see their tears as plans go sideways, I like to imagine that someday they’ll sit where I am with people to love, hobbies to pursue, and maybe even a spare dollar in the bank.


Which statement best describes the narrator’s viewpoint regarding obstacles his children face?


A. He ignores their struggles with obstacles because he believes everything happens for a reason.


B. He works to help his children avoid obstacles so that they will never have to wonder how their lives could have gone.


C. He fears the obstacles and worries that life will not turn out as well for his children as it did for him.


D. He regards the obstacles calmly, with the perspective of someone who has faced obstacles and lived through them.


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Answer:

Explanation:

Let's start with the answer. It has to be D.

The key sentence is this one:

My children are fresh to the adult world, and when I see their tears as plans go sideways, I like to imagine that someday they’ll sit where I am with people to love, hobbies to pursue, and maybe even a spare dollar in the bank.

He's calm because he's been through it all before. Most of all, he knows that this to will end -- whatever problems his children have are only momentary. (As an aside, I would like to hear what his wife says).

A: Not the answer. He doesn't ignore the troubles. If he believes it happens for a reason, he doesn't say what it is.

B: Not the answer: Nowhere does it say anything about future considerations or at least that one.

C: He doesn't fear for them. He has a calm confidence that they will work through it. Not the answer.

Explain two steps you could take when perform an impact study to test the effectiveness of an intervention programme ​

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Answer:

Assessing the effectiveness of educational interventions relies on quantifying differences between interventions groups over time in a between-within design. Binary outcome variables

Explanation:

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Read the sentence.

The book Moby Dic is about Captain Ahab, and he searches for a white whale.
Which revision corrects the faulty coordination in the sentence?

A)The book Moby Dic is about Captain Ahab, who searches for a white whale.

B)Searching for a white whale, the book Moby Dic is about Captain Ahab.

C) Moby Dic , which is a book about Captain Ahab and searching for a white whale.

D) Captain Ahab, who searches for a white whale in Moby Dic, is a book.

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Answer:

A) The book Moby Dic is about Captain Ahab, who searches for a white whale.

Explanation:

Faulty coordination refers to the coordination of the clauses in the sentence. This means that the clauses must coordinate with each other in a sentence.

The given sentence "the book Moby Dic is about Captain Ahab, and he searches for a white whale" can be changed in the following way-

The book Moby Dic is about Captain Ahab, who searches for a white whale.

This structure coordinates the form by using the relative pronoun to refer to the noun "Captain Ahab".

Thus, the correct answer is option A.  

Tell a story about a song that you use to listen when you had troubles

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Answer:

"Alone in a Room"

Explanation:

When I was younger and in school, I had alot of bad days, like most people at that age. This was due to both social and academic problems. I would usually go home and listen to the song "Alone in a Room" on repeat. I loved the acoustic version of this song as it was very melodic and the lyrics really spoke to me. It talks about feeling overwhelmed and stressed, but finally understanding that in order to move on you need to air out everything that you are holding in. Sitting alone in a room and getting everything off your chest in a creative way is always the best choice.

Where did Jenny get the information she needed to contact Helen Foxton?)​

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Answer:

Jenny found her details online.

Explanation:

The article "Jenny Talbot: mountain bike rider" tells the story of Jenny Talbot and her bike riding hobby. The passage tells the particular event that Jenny participated in, where she encountered Helen Foxton and got valuable advice from the top mountain biker.

After Jenny registered herself for the bike race that will take place nearby her home, she received the race information from the organizers. There, she found out that Helen Foxton, the top mountain biker was participating too. So, she looked up her details online and emailed her for some tips. Helen replied with the advice to enjoy the race and that she'll also look out for the young biker.

please help, the question is in the image.

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Answer:

C

Explanation:

Answer: A) He uses short sentences to highlight the critical nature of the moment

Explanation: We can automatically rule our B) and C). This is because the text mentions no desire to erase the past, nor does the tone signify that. D) would also not work because Mandela's credibility is not being put in doubt in this article, and his tone does not signify defensiveness of his credibility. That leaves us with A). The repeated sentences all contain contents that point to change, and uprooting a corrupt system, which is urgent.

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Read this excerpt from a short story.

The set committee had labored for weeks constructing a background to recreate a 1950s New York City neighborhood. The students in charge of costumes had scoured thrift shops for well-worn denim and leather. The cast had rehearsed lines and performed their songs until each member could recite their part forwards and backwards. But nobody wanted to perform for an empty house. The only remaining hurdle was the promotion of the play. As Pine Valley High’s first spring production, the student body would need to be convinced that West Side Story should not be missed.

What complication is introduced in the excerpt?

The cast members struggle to memorize lines.
The costumes do not reflect the play’s time period.
The set committee must repair the background.
The students must work to promote the play.

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Answer:

The students must work to promote the play.

Explanation:

When they say the students didn't want to perform for an empty house, the audience is being referred to as the house. The house it empty, meaning no one has come to watch. So, they need to promote the play to make it more popular.

In "The Nose" by Nikolai Gogol, which statement is a piece of leads you to infer that Ivan Jakovlevitch is often blamed for things that are not his fault?

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Answer:

One claim that Ivan Jakovlevitch is often blamed for things that are not his fault is his thought of getting rid of his nose instead of putting it back where it belongs and returning to Kovaloff.

Explanation:

"The Nose" by Nikolai Gogol It tells the story of how a man named Kovalyov woke up one day without a nose, but not only that, his nose came alive and started walking around the city as if he were an important person. Kovalyov is a very stuck-up aristocrat who prides himself on his social standing, looks and power. However, reaching without the nose comes as a big shock to him.

This nose ends up at the home of Ivan Yakovlevich, a barber, who quickly identifies that the nose belongs to Kovalyov. He keeps thinking about what he should do with it and thinks about getting rid of the nose, instead of returning it to Kovalyov, because he's afraid that Kovalyov will blame him for the runaway nose, even if he's not at all to blame. This shows how Ivan is constantly blamed for things he is not at fault.

Write a paragraph on Diary entry ​

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Diary entries are a collection of pages in a diary. The diary entries are usually organized according to the date and time of when it was written. Depending on the diary types, each entry holds contents ranging from thoughts, emotions, reflections, dreams and so on.

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A diary entry is a section of writing that has been organized by date. The entries within your diary are how you organize the thoughts, feelings and opinions you are pouring into it. They break up your diary into smaller pieces. Think of them like chapters of a book. They can be as short or as long as you want.

What usually creates or communicates mood in a short story?

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Answer:

dialogue

Explanation:

mood is set by characters, tone is set by author

The details used in the story to describe the setting (basically the dialogue of the story) creates the mood in a short story.

List 10 vices/ evil traits Old Major gives in his speech​

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Answer:

According to Old Major, the evil traits of man included;

1. Living in a house

2. Sleeping in a bed

3. Drinking alcohol

4. Wearing clothes

5. Smoking tobacco

6. Engaging in trade

7.Touching money

8. Killing fellow animals

9. Tyranny

10. Disunity

Explanation:

When Old Major gave his speech in the book, 'Animal Farm', he basically incited hatred against man amongst the animals. He did not like the fact that Man did not produce anything but was always consuming and using the animals for his own selfish purpose. He wanted the animals to revolt against Man but in doing this, he did not want them to become like Man. Thus, he listed several vices of man that he hoped the animals will never adopt.

For him, anything that walked on two legs was to be hated while anything that walked on four legs or flew was to be loved.

please give me one of ______. a.that b.those c.this d.these​

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Answer:

it is those

Explanation:

HELP I NEED THIS FOR ENGLISH SO WHAT IS THAT LIKE GANG CALLED IN THE OUTSIDERS I THINK IT HAS TIGER IN IT LIKE TIGER STREET GANG OR SOMETHING I NEED TO KNOWWW

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Answer:

The Greasers?

Explanation:

I think the only "gang" in the outsiders is the greasers could be wrong though

Answer:

Is it the Socs gang?

Explanation:

3. Put those plants in the sun. If they
enough light, they
(, not get)
4. If you
the right password, you
the website. (not have not access)
5. My mum
well if she
coffee before bed (not sleep, drink
6.
annoyed if you
your homework (get, not do)
your teacher
3) Complete the zero conditional sentences by choosing the correct pairs of verbs from the bou Put the
verbs in the correct form.
feel/not do
be/play
not wake/not get cannot read
Do remember
1. If!
to do my homework, 1
the teacher a
2. If
my brother up in the morning, he
is school on time
3.1
music really loudly if I
st home alone
4. If
sleep at night, 1
a magazine.
5. you
embarrassed if you
a mistake when speaking English?
6. She
her homework if she
tired
4 Complete the facts. Use the verbs
below and the zero conditional,
5) Write the zero conditional sentences using prompts
Example: 1/fee/faint/1/se/blood treel final se blood

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I don't know it will take was this for a year or thing

Match the term to the description.

1. character vs. self
one person who is in conflict within herself
2. character vs. society
one person who is in conflict with three or more people
3. character vs. technology
how the author makes the reader feel about a character or situation
4. mood
the action of the story
5. plot
One person who is in conflict with something man-made

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I thjnk it is answer 1(im not to sure)

Answer:

Character vs. Self - One person who is in conflict within herself

Character vs. society- One person who is in conflict with three or more people

Character vs. Technology- One person who is in conflict with something man-made.

Mood- How the Author makes the reader feel about a character or situation.

Plot- The action of the story

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Explanation:

Select the correct answer.

Which statement best explains why writers of persuasive essays usually write in third-person voice?

A.

They use descriptive language to "show" readers what happened, rather than "telling" them.

B.

They want readers to see detailed descriptions of events, characters, and settings.

C.

They want readers to see their essays as detached and fair and not as personal, biased opinion.

D.

They center on a hypothesis that is based on personal values or reactions to developments or policies.

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C. They want readers to see their essays as detached and fair and not as personal, biased opinion.

Writers of persuasive essays usually write in third-person voice because they want readers to see their essays as detached and fair and not as personal, biased opinion. Option C is correct.

What are persuasive essays?

Persuasive essays, also known as the argument essay, uses logic and reason to show that one idea is more legitimate than another. It attempts to persuade a reader to adopt a certain point of view or to take a particular action.

Argument essays, another name for persuasive writing, use logic and reason to demonstrate why one idea is more valid than another. It makes an effort to persuade the reader to adopt a specific viewpoint or to do a specific action.

Further simple structures are common in persuasive texts. You must express your perspective on a subject clearly before repeatedly supporting it with outside facts or proof. A strong conclusion should remove any remaining doubts from the reader's mind.

Therefore Writers want readers to see their essays as detached and fair and not as personal, biased opinion

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Which sentence could replace sentence 5 to make the paragraph more precise?
Read the paragraph from Liam's narrative.
1. I had never been more frightened in my entire life.
2. As I stepped onto the diving platform, I waited for instructions from my diving coach.
3. Only because his directions were so clear, and because he was so nice, I was able to do it.
4. It had all been worth it, I thought, as I changed from my bathing suit back into clothes.
5. I had achieved what I had set out to do. [REPLACE THIS SENTENCE WITH ONE OF THE OPTIONS BELOW]

A. I was able to accomplish the goal I had set for myself. (what he specifically set out to do is still NOT precisely stated)
B. I had finally managed to dive from the highest platform. ( Yes. precisely stated)
C. I had surprised myself by being able to do what I didn't think I could. (still not precisely stated)
D. I truly owed a lot o Coach Wilkerson for all the help he had given me. ( nope )

My question is.. if the correct answer is B. I had finally managed to dive from the highest platform, because IT IS A MORE PRECISE way of stating sentence 5, then why has this question been mostly answered incorrectly SO much, taking up valuable answer slots? Please answer to post this.

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Answer:

the answer is in teh problem, this is the correct answer to this problem stated above

The sentence that can replace paragraph 5 to make is more precise is that "I was able to accomplish the goal I had set for myself". That is option A.

What is a precised statement?

A precised statement is a statement that accurately defines another statement without additional of extra information.

From the Liam's narrative statements, number five statement didn't say anything about diving or swimming. He just stated that he had achieved what he had set out to do.

Therefore, the statement that can replace it is that "I was able to accomplish the goal I had set for myself".

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How does the final sentence of the article contribute to the meaning
of the text?: "We bet nobody's gotten into a fight while waiting for
that oyster party." CAN SOMEONE PLEASE TELL ME WHAT TO WRITE I DONT WANNA WRITE SOMETHING SOMEONE ALREADY SAID

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Answer:

The sentence at the end of the article contributes to the meaning of the entire text because it shows how buying for experiences is more peaceful, less stressful and more profitable than buying products.

Explanation:

The article "You Can Buy Happiness, If It's An Experience" shows the human being is happier buying an experience than a product. This is because product purchase is stressful, competitive and often violent. We have examples of violence during promotional events such as black fridays, where we see people attacking each other in order to buy a particular product. Buying an experience, like a cruise trip for example, is a much more peaceful, exciting, surprising and sociable situation. The idea of buying an experience is much happier and more fruitful, mainly because we don't have stressful events related to it. The last sentence of the article reinforces this idea and shows how with less stress we are happier, which is the subject portrayed in the text.

Read the excerpt from chapter 20 of The Awakening.

That was about the substance of the two letters. Edna felt that if there had been a message for her, she would
have received it. The despondent frame of mind in which she had left home began again to overtake her, and
she remembered that she wished to find Mademoiselle Reisz.

Which prediction is most likely based on the events that have emerged so far in The Awakening?

A. Edna will not be able to find Mademoiselle Reisz despite her best efforts.

B. Edna will change her mind about finding Mademoiselle Reisz due to fatigue.

C. Mademoiselle Reisz will tell Edna to embrace her duties as a wife and mother.

D. Mademoiselle Reisz will play a key role in Edna's transformation of self.


Please hurry I’m on a time limit!!!!!!
PLEASE ANSWER QUICKLY IM RUNNING OUT OF TIME!!!!!

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Answer:

im not sure but i'd go with D.

Write a paragraph about a city you have been to. Write about these things. - how you got there why you went there -what you did when you were there Write at least 50-80 words

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Answer:

In february of last year i went to Santiago in Chile, i passed one week there and i got there by plane, i had to get three planes to go there, me and my parents went to there because they wanted to meet the city and all of the touristic attractions, we also went with some of their friends and we had so much fun, we went to some parks and we knew their pretty culture, we went to some shoppings to and a big amusement park, we went to a zoo too and some beaches in some cities near Santiago, we always woke up early and we were going with the car my parents rented to a lot of places, and we always had lunch in a tematic restaurant.

Explanation:

Help please ;-------;

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Answer:

is

expected

have not (?) or haven't (?) tricky one

are

had

rented

came

have

had to

helped

enjoyed

began

took

moved

had not made (?) Not understanding what exactly they're looking for as the answer.

made

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What does Anne Frank learn about herself during her time in the Annex? What can readers learn about human nature--or people in general--by reading Anne Frank's diary? What drove Anne to continue keeping a diary throughout her time in the Annex? Did her reasons change? How would describe Anne Frank's personality? What events or details provide the strongest clues? What importance does Anne Frank's diary have now? What can today's readers learn from it?​

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What word does NOT describe Juliet in Act III of Romeo and Juliet?

A. Optimistic
B. Strong
C. Love sick
D. Confused

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The answer Is D. Confused

D. Confused not describe Juliet in Act III of Romeo and Juliet.

In Act 3, scene 1 of Romeo and Juliet, Romeo's brand new marriage gets complicated because of the feud, or long-standing fight, between the Capulets and Montagues. He tries to keep peace because Tybalt, a Capulet, is now related to him by marriage, but he feels a strong sense of revenge after Tybalt kills Mercutio

What are three important events in Act 3 of Romeo and Juliet?

Benvolio and Mercutio (Montague faction) meet Tybalt (Capulet faction). Mercutio is killed by Tybalt. Romeo revenges the death of Mercutio and kills Tybalt. Prince of Verona banishes Romeo from Verona.

How does Act 3 end in Romeo and Juliet?

Overcome by love, Romeo responds that he will stay with Juliet, and that he does not care whether the Prince's men kill him. Faced with this turnaround, Juliet declares that the bird they heard was the lark; that it is dawn and he must flee.

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Appeals
That a representation in parliament is impracticable, we all agree; but the
consequence is, that we must have a representation in our supreme legislatures
here. This was the consequence that was drawn by kings, ministers, our
ancestors, and the whole nation, more than a century ago, when the colonies
were first settled, 1
Which appeal is John Adams using in this letter to a
supported the king?
a fellew colonist who
Type answer here

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Answer:

Ethos

Explanation:

Ethos, also known as Credibility or Ethical Appeal is a reference to the authority and suitability of a person to preside over a matter. This appeal is one of the three appeals (Ethos, Pathos, and Logos) used to help speakers win an argument. Ethos cites the position or qualification of a subject to instill confidence in the audience that a position which they support should be believed.

When John Adams mentioned the positions of Kings, Ministers, Ancestors, and the whole nation, he thus wants the audience to believe that the consequence was valid because these notable personalities endorsed it.

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