What grade is this for? Because depending on the grade, then I can see what needs to be fixed.
First of all you need to change the title (if that tile is not mandatory) to why college should be free and not why should college be free
second there is a typo in your first paragraph and some wording issues
i would change it with An immense amount of students could not and cannot afford to pay tuition for their education
make sure to include in all three of your body paragraphs information supporting you main ideas make sure to tell where you got the information and make sure to quote, for instance in your 3rd body paragraph you could find an article on average cost a student spends on textbooks and stuff like that be carful while doing this and QUOTE AND TELL WHERE YOU GOT IT FROM SO YOU DO NOT PLAGERIZE
good job on your transitions
and so far you are doing good on your essay
once you fix this stuff up it will match the rubric
- kay
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HELP ITS OVER DUE. please
its about The Rainforest Foundation
Answer:
Explanation: The Rainforest Foundation US is a non-profit NGO working in Central and South America. It is one of the first international organizations to support the indigenous peoples of the world's rainforests in their efforts to protect their environment and fulfill their rights to land, life, and livelihood. The Rainforest Foundation helps protect the incredibly rich biological diversity of the rainforest and the cultural integrity of the peoples whose lives and livelihoods are inextricably linked to those forests.
Hui! Pehea 'oe? he aha ka ʻōlelo aʻu e ʻōlelo nei?
这是100分,因为我一直在念书,所以我用另一种语言写了 I rlly need help what this mean
Answer:
This is 100 points, because I have been studying, so I wrote in another language
Explanation:
Answer:
This is 100 points, because I have been studying, so I wrote in another language.
Explanation:
this is chinese, i have also been studying it. my dad is chinese so i think it would be cool to learn the full language :)
Which came first: the chicken or the egg? Why do you think this?
Answer:
the chicken because the chicken has to lay the egg i think am i right ?
Explanation:
Answer:
The egg
Explanation:
because the egg had to hatch into a chicken.
Also what if two birds that weren't really chickens created a chicken egg.
so the egg came first
can someone give me a conclusion on why college should be free
I WILL GIVE BRAINLIEST IF ANSWERED IN ITALIAN AND CORRECTLY ALL QUESTIONS NEED ANSWERS
Answer:
i can not see it
Explanation:
is this a good essay? if i should change anything please tell me!
Answer: Yes, I like the words you chose.
A tip would be if your teacher had a rubric, use that it would help a lot.
Translate this in English
"kulanakauhale pele iki"
Answer:
"little town of lava", or "little volcanic town"
Explanation:
hope this helps! :)
人気のイタリア料理は何ですか?それが使用するいくつかの成分は何ですか?